I’m sort of drawn to this kind of content like I am to “Plan Nine From Outer Space,” or maybe like a moth to a forest fire. Either way it’s TERRIBLE and I like it for that fact alone. It looks like your main picture changes every time the page refreshes, which I like (and will “appropriate” from you), but I’m not so sure about your backgrounds. I think the white in the picture box area needs to be replaced with some sort of color or maybe just a gray. I’d say the same of the background white for the entire page outside your content, but I wonder if combined with my previous suggestion that wouldn’t be too much. White is good, but part of me wants to see some of that white (or all of it. Whichever looks the best) replaced with a more space-filling color.
This site does a good job showing that the internet had a vast amount of freedom. This freedom allow anyone to put up anything on there. It’s impossible to control what is posted especially bad art/design. I laughed at the papyrus on the ads.
Funny thing is, I started clicking things and it was a while before I realized I wasn’t on Heather’s site anymore, might be a good thing I’m not certain though.
I think this is pretty funny. I like how you just found bad sites and put em together to an even worse site. Plus, anytime you have Large Breasts as one of your options in the navigation…it’s gotta be a good site.
I’m sort of drawn to this kind of content like I am to “Plan Nine From Outer Space,” or maybe like a moth to a forest fire. Either way it’s TERRIBLE and I like it for that fact alone. It looks like your main picture changes every time the page refreshes, which I like (and will “appropriate” from you), but I’m not so sure about your backgrounds. I think the white in the picture box area needs to be replaced with some sort of color or maybe just a gray. I’d say the same of the background white for the entire page outside your content, but I wonder if combined with my previous suggestion that wouldn’t be too much. White is good, but part of me wants to see some of that white (or all of it. Whichever looks the best) replaced with a more space-filling color.
This site does a good job showing that the internet had a vast amount of freedom. This freedom allow anyone to put up anything on there. It’s impossible to control what is posted especially bad art/design. I laughed at the papyrus on the ads.
It almost doesn’t seem like a joke. That is sad.
Matt’s suggestions seem valid (he is doing really well in this crit).
I think it might work better if you mirrored the Whitney site more. Include the links to current exhibitions, etc.
http://www.whitney.org/
This could be a much larger more complex piece.
Funny thing is, I started clicking things and it was a while before I realized I wasn’t on Heather’s site anymore, might be a good thing I’m not certain though.
where did my original post go? it was here…now its gone…I’m sad.
I forgot to mention that there is a second remix page linked to this one – when you click on the Cosplay Singles link, there is a Match.com remix.
I think this is pretty funny. I like how you just found bad sites and put em together to an even worse site. Plus, anytime you have Large Breasts as one of your options in the navigation…it’s gotta be a good site.